#VeryShortStories
The young couple seemed like perfect buyers for the quaint cottage – they were friendly, bubbly, successful! During the two-hour long property visit, they had walked around the house with keen interest, pointing things out to each other and marvelling at little conveniences put in over the years.
Their incessant chatter revealed a lot about who they were and how they lived – a nice balance between party weekends and quiet times. They planned on getting dogs, they said, since they now would have the space larger dogs required. And the wife shyly revealed that she was expecting a baby!
A baby in the house would change everything. Life would continue after a long interruption, when the cottage was abandoned after a ghastly incident with the last residents. The sales representative had a ready-made little speech about the accident – he knew exactly when to recite it. And at the right moment, he started!
“. . . . but of course, none of this has ever been verified, nor do we know for sure that the father killed three daughters and his wife before shooting himself in the head!” he finished.
The wife had listened carefully to the morbid story. She was quiet for a moment, then drew a deep breath. The poor sales representative felt his sales commission start to slip away. This was the fourth time he had brought prospective clients to this property.
The wife looked into the representative’s eyes. “Every bit of what you just told us is true,” she said quietly. “I know. I was there,” she concluded, her hands clasped around her belly now full of new life! (271 words)
The young couple seemed like perfect buyers for the quaint cottage – they were friendly, bubbly, successful! During the two-hour long property visit, they had walked around the house with keen interest, pointing things out to each other and marvelling at little conveniences put in over the years.
Their incessant chatter revealed a lot about who they were and how they lived – a nice balance between party weekends and quiet times. They planned on getting dogs, they said, since they now would have the space larger dogs required. And the wife shyly revealed that she was expecting a baby!
A baby in the house would change everything. Life would continue after a long interruption, when the cottage was abandoned after a ghastly incident with the last residents. The sales representative had a ready-made little speech about the accident – he knew exactly when to recite it. And at the right moment, he started!
“. . . . but of course, none of this has ever been verified, nor do we know for sure that the father killed three daughters and his wife before shooting himself in the head!” he finished.
The wife had listened carefully to the morbid story. She was quiet for a moment, then drew a deep breath. The poor sales representative felt his sales commission start to slip away. This was the fourth time he had brought prospective clients to this property.
The wife looked into the representative’s eyes. “Every bit of what you just told us is true,” she said quietly. “I know. I was there,” she concluded, her hands clasped around her belly now full of new life! (271 words)